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October 6, 2013
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In your self

deep in your heart,

in the depths

were light cannot shine 

its beautiful, pure light

 

Were the world outside

full of beauty and joy

cannot penetrate the

sadness that is building up

with fake smiles outside

 

Only when unleashed

tearless and unburdaned

the darkness fades

into the glow of light

so pretty

like a butterfly

 

It shines in the

dark corners of your

soul,

heart,

and mind.

 

A caterpillar

changing into

weightless but fragile,

butterfly that is so light

it flies high into

the bright, blue sky

where the angels sing

and birds fly

 

This poem is based on times when I feel down but someone cheers me up.
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midnightdream2 Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Photographer
Your use of metaphors is mind blowing. :aww:
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p00bear Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist

Thanks  so much! I am still working on my poem writing... Sweating a little... 

P.S. Thanks for the favorite =D

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